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Drabble // Bleach // Orihime

Title :: Stronger
Setting :: Bleach
Characters :: Inoue Orihime, Zaraki Kenpachi. Incl. Yachiru, Ikkaku, Yumichika & Ishida.
Words :: 613
When :: During the Soul Society Arc.

"Oi. You're too slow."

Orihime looked up, still leaning on the wall and panting, pretending not to notice the sympathetic look Yumichika was shooting in her direction, nor the way both Ishida and Ikkaku were studying the far wall as though it contained all the secrets of the universe, just waiting to be deciphered by the one who stared at it long and hard enough. She suspected Ishida would claim victory over the thug from general principles, if she ever shared that particular mental image with him. But he'd smirk at Ikkaku until the third seat of the eleventh division broke the Quincy's skull from sheer annoyance, so there was another thought she'd be keeping to herself.

She did a lot of that, lately, she found.

"Aheh!" She smiled, focusing on the here and now trough the gasps for air, inwardly furious with herself for having tired out so quickly. "Sorry." The shield being fractured had drained her more than she'd imagine possible. And then all those healings. She should have been able to hold out, and do better. She really should have. She wasn't strong enough, it seemed. She clenched her teeth and swore to herself that this would change, that somehow she'd become stronger. Soon. Another breath of wonderful, precious air, which she held in for a moment, eyes half closed at the sheer pleasure of being able to breathe - it was even enough, for a brief instant, to overwhelm the shame and self-loathing at being so pathetically weak. "So sorry. I'll be fine, really. Just give me a moment. I'll get stronger." The last was said out loud rather than kept to herself, softly and full of determination, Orihime never realizing what she'd done.

Silence reigned for a moment, heavy and full of impatience, until Yachiru popped up from over Zaraki's shoulder. Her gaze flicked from Zaraki's face to Orihime's, back to Zaraki's - and then slightly lower, eyeing Orihime's generously heaving bosom. And then slowly back to Zaraki, with none of her habitual fondness. Yachiru had never been one to like sharing Zaraki's attention. Not one bit.

Zaraki's gaze shifted to the side suddenly as he felt Yachiru's reiatsu flare irritably, and his lips twitched in the ghost of a smile. Everyone was so busy looking elsewhere that no one noticed it. Save Orihime, who had chanced to resume thinking just then, and had opened her eyes to apologize again.

Her eyes went wide as the looming death god looked back at her just as suddenly as he'd looked away, that slight smile still present. Before she could even blush properly, unsure why, there was nothing but a feeling of weightlessness and a startled squawk from Yachiru was the only thing that allowed Orihime to realize where she was.

"Oh! Oh no! No, I couldn't possibly," she half-laughed, half-stuttered, the audible gasps from both Ikkaku and Yumichika more than enough for her to catch on to exactly how unusual this was, never mind the way she could practically feel Yachiru's burning glare drilling a hole in the side of her head. It was, most definitely, time to play stupid again. "I'd be too heavy, really!"

"Che. Shuddap already and hang on, woman."

And with that, they were off, the cool wind calming her burning cheeks, Yachiru's reiatsu soon overwhelmed by Zaraki's.

It was, she thought faintly, nice and warm, under all the bloodthirstiness. That explained a lot, really. And there was another thought she'd not be sharing with anyone, any time soon. Orihime smiled to herself, secretly, and managed to keep from cheering out loud and demanding that Zaraki go faster.

Barely.

Seconds later, he sped up anyway.

Current Mood: amused amused
Comments

I wish I had a Ken-chan of my veeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrry own.Life's just not fair sometimes.Heck,even one ride on his back would be teh awesome.

:: grins ::

Glad you liked it!

(And who doesn't wish that? Granted, though, it'd make for interesting cleaning bills and rather traumatized cleaning store owners. Oh. Wait. Dammit. Plot bunny attack. Augh!)

Oh, so cute! Of course Orihime's stated desire to get stronger would get her on Zaraki's good side, and of course Yachiru would be jealous of having to share her Ken-chan's attention.

:: cackles ::

Logic - ain't it grand? Especially when it results in this? ;)

*squees happily*

ken-chan!

HA! I need to write a drabble now where Yachiru uses his full name. Watch the rest of the 11th cower in terror. >:D

That was great! XD Good old Zaraki, how we love him so. ^^=

:: beams ::

Thank you! And oh, how we do indeed!

HOLY CRAPS! HORRAY!

HORRAY! THIS IS GREAT! ^.^ *dances*

As community manager, I hereby invite you to [livejournal.com profile] asterisk_plus X3

We'd love to have you and your fics!

TY!

Re: HOLY CRAPS! HORRAY!

:: laughs ::

Well, how can I say no to that? :)

Shall I repost the link leading to the fic there as well, after I join?

::facepalm:: I'm already sucked into the notion of Zaraki/Orihime, too. We all know he's a sucker for a cute girl, ne? Espcially one who wants to get stronger. I really liked this, especially how you used Orihime's observational skills. =^^= I'd love to see you write more..

:: grins ::

I've done my work well. ;) And I'll be revisiting this thematic again, for sure. Just trying to figure out how much of it I can keep relatively linked to the timeline and when I'll have to diverge into AU land (in terms of manga story continuity, anyway... *coughs*)

LJ being stupid means I just got your comment reply with the link to this, but oh wow, was that ever adorable.

I really liked it, aside from the squee factor, Orihime's observations and her determination to get stronger, jealous Yachiru, and Ken-chan noticing Orihime.... it just worked.

:: grins ::

Well, this is one of the two series I'll probably be focusing on for a while now, so look forward to more. ;)